the rain is raining all around
it falls on field and tree
it falls on the ships at sea
it falls on umbrellas here.
What do u think of this poem?
Very nice. Short and sweet and gets to the point. Good job.
Reply:I like it
Well written
Reply:I like how it takes you to different places that are all experiencing the same thing. The unifying rain. I can really clearly picture all of those scenes in the quiet rain, thanks!
Best Wishes
Reply:needs work
Reply:its deep if you think about it I like it so little word but so muuch to think about!
Reply:i dont get it. i think it good though
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