the rain is raining all around
it falls on field and tree
it falls on umbrellas here
it falls on the ships at sea
What do u think of this poem?
short sweet to the point i like it
Reply:it is so touching.
i love it.
i love ships
Reply:............emo
Reply:sounds kinda elementary.
Reply:Very nice poem. It's short and sweet gets to the point and easy to understand. Good job.
Reply:cute. small. change raining to falling. add some lines and it will be nicer
Reply:short, but great.gets to the point. good job!
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